User talk:David Black

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Welcome

Hello, Andreas, and thanks for the welcome. I'll try to be more objective, but I have trouble keeping myself out of anything I write. I don't have any problems with your editing. Please add illustrations to my articles, as I don't know how to do this. I hope I can be of help to you in tis terrific project, David.



Hi David, and welcome to PhantomWiki. You will notice that I have edited the articles you contributed to (Captain Savarna, Kay, Hawa, The Patrolwomen) to make them more in line with the other articles. As PhantomWiki is supposed to be encyclopedic, the articles should be kept neutral and the writer's own opinions should not shine through in the text. Please contribute more to our articles, the character articles especially need more work. But I hope you also don't mind if others adjust what you have written to comply with the encyclopedic standards. Andreas 18:56, 5 December 2010 (UTC)

Hi David, I have made some edits to your summary of Crocco Island West. As I mentioned, articles should avoid any personal opinions or conclusions. The plot summary is only to give a brief overview of the events, it is not a review where we point out if a story (or character) is any better than others; this is up to readers to determine for themselves once they have read the story. Since this is not a forum, we keep to the straight facts only, to avoid any debates because of differences in opinion. Andreas 11:09, 6 December 2010 (UTC)